Second Rough Cut

This is my second rough cut. I edited my video further from my initial rough cut and came out with this. I have since had it looked at by my media teacher who has given me some pointers to improve my music video. These included:

• remove the jump cut sections as they are not consistent enough to give a distinct style throughout the whole video
• remove or edit some of the focus pulls as they are too unfocused for too long
• continuity error: it cuts from when the hero is sat on the stairs and hears someone coming, straight to the girl walking in the house by the stairs the hero was sat on. Need to fill that gap with footage of the hero quickly leaving the house before the girl walks in

I will now fix my video according to these points and film the pick-up shots that I need to include.